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Burning
KH (march 6,1990 / )

Burning

Poem By Katie Huntress

Candle burning in the dark,
Some ones watching from the dark,
I slash my wrist and
Hope to die,
I sit in a corner and
Cry till I can’t cry,
Will some one come help me?
Candle burning in the dark,
Some ones watching from the dark.

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Wow, Katie. This poem is deep. Its a really short and sweet poem. You can really touch readers with this poem. I know I was touched.
I would change at least one of the 'dark' to Park ? ? ? What do you think? Best H
someone is always watching from the dark.. it's either ourself screaming for help or that special one that waits for the right tme before he comes for the rescue.. HBH
Very ominous! You are screaming for help! I sure hope the people that really need to read these poems get the chance. Sincerely, mary


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