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Can You...
TT (3/27/89 / klamth falls OR)

Can You...

Can you take me away dissolve these walls that contain me
lets plan an escape an than turn our fantasy to reality...
can you diminish the pain that seems relentless to leave my soul
can you do the job that no alchol or drug could do an make me feel whole...
will you be my enduring faith when im in the depths of my despair
will you show me unconditional love an be that one person that truly cared...

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A very well penned and poignant write! 10+++ Keep it up, you got what it takes to make it through the poetry world, talent! Thanks for sharing, Love and Peace for always!
Can you feel it. My mind is in a poetic meter. Nice, troublesome. Your opening lines reveal a longing to become detached from a confinement you will not allow. Can you...feel it. My mind is in a poetic meter.