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Can You See
DK (honestly why would i tell you? / does it matter?)

Can You See

can you see the boy here
do you see it my dear
cant you see this is me
i may look different not like i used to be
such adversity has changed it all
fall after fall
has changed me so much
and now i look like and talk like such
maybe not for the best
maybe now im worse then all the rest
i really dont know
i dont pretend or put on a fancy show
this is me accept it or not

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Comments (3)

Interesting poem. Yes, we must be ourselves, no matter what others may think. Good poem. Read mine - Who Am I - Adeline
david your such a good poet...this poem is strong, , , very good poem...~hazel
powerful write, great job