Weature(New Version)

Every season comes and passed,
winter can never last.
As january comes and passed,
tweleve years has gone so fast.

It's difficult to time hangs,
because time after big bang.
See coloured spectacles of light,
at the winter's night.

put down in black and white,
because summer gives sun light.
keep discussion once and for all,
don't forget our burning ball.

by Abhinav Ashish

Comments (3)

I really like this poem. It drifts you away to peaceful images.. Well done HBH
WOW! i am in awe! this poem is your best one that ive read yet!
Very nicely done, Zoe. You are so young yet you already have a fairly unique way of seeing.