Taste/Huiku

FreeExpression
bad as eating porridge yuck
now found taste yummy.©

By Jerry Behr
11/9/2011

by Jerry Behr Number 2

Comments (6)

I know someone couldna a cared less for his anger.
He knew how to write and bare his heart. The rhythm is so there, pulsing in every line.... like a heartbeat
Beautifully written poem......
An astounding poem to show the hovering and grief of losing his love.Love is nature here and its lack is explained in a striking manner.
I see the flowers! ! And the ways opf nature. Thanks for sharing.
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