Poem By Selena Star

carmen was her name
partying was her game
she loved to get drunk
and eddie was her hunk
i love her so
from head to toe
why'd she have to die?
when i heard, i thought it was a lie
when i saw her in the casket
i wanted to crawl in a basket
why'd she have to die?

Comments about Carmen-06

I'm sorry to hear it happened... I like the poem though, like Rocco Scocco said. It had great rhyming.
sad, although i like your rhymes well done
awww that's really sad. great poem though. Lylyanna

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