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Caving In
WS (June 1,1991 / Richmond hill)

Caving In

Poem By Wandering Scarlet

My support bar is collapsing,
fading away,
how will i stand,
how hard will i fall,
how will i survive,
my foundation is collapsing,
i'm crumbling to pieces
without my support,
i cannot exist,
when will I be able to relax
not being parenoyed,
about falling
about crumbling
shattering
..................
ceasing to exist.......

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Format is good espically talented. Keep on writing
'wow! ' is all i can say
This is something like a small slide show, giving every step of the caving in. Good.
all I have to say is... deep
Don't we all feel that way sometimes? good poem


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