Givers & Takers

To take,
without giving,
can leave the
with an aching heart.
But, one day,
the taker
may realize
what was
and realize
it shouldn't have been

by Jacqui Broad

Comments (2)

This is a really beautiful poem, great descriptions, feelings, insights and yet astounding at the end with the line - 'without making any difference.' Lovely work John.
It has a lapping rhythm, like lake water on the prow of a canoe. Bless us all!