Crippled Love 60

I can see the pain in your beatiful
green eyes, you been hurt before,
by a man telling you lies.NOW the
man is a ghost, and you a broken
shell, better learn to let go, before
you loose your mind.I can see the
distance from me to you, you carry
the weight of a stranger, about to
explode, better learn to let it go,
before you loose your mind,
for this love you had, is dead and
buried in your broken shell.

by DAVID GERARDINO

Comments (2)

I dig this poem and how difficult it is to let go of anything that haunts us, I also completely agree with your statement about music and poetry being the same.
I WROTE THIS AS MUSIC FIRST, CAPO ON 2nd FRETT, THEN CHORDS E, A, B7 KEEP IN MIND THAT BECOUSE OF THE CAPO THE KEY IS NOT THE SAME, ANYWAY FOR THOSE WHO CARE THERE YOU GO, ALSO, I LOOK AT POETRY, AND MUSIC, AND WHATEVER ELES AS THE SAME, FOR ME ANY WAY.