Give Me Two Rhythmic Wings

Poem By Jaanvi S

Beige suede boots seem to be warm.
An aqua-blue hemp shirt am I wearing.

Breathe the breeze coming into the kitchen from the window at noon.


I'm ready to welcome summer, cutting cucumbers.

Comments about Give Me Two Rhythmic Wings

Unique in angle style and harmonious language... Wonderful breath of fresh air... Cheers Karen
Lovely! Full winter, here too colder than yesterday tomorrow colder than today ..those boots are warm but if wore for long shall kill your feet) . I also see, nice cucumber gives the breeze of summer to our soul, sigh, still a long way to go. Good poem, loved it, thank you for share!


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