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Dad's Touch

Growing up, all I had was Dad.
He was my best friend, come what may.
At times, I cried when I was sad.
Dad gently wiped my tears away.
There weren't that many times for tears.
We lived and loved and laughed a lot.
Dad praised my hopes and soothed my fears.
Learn from feeling - was what Dad taught.
I wished that we'd go on and on.
But, that wish withered when Dad died.
I waited till they all had gone.
Kneeling next to his grave, I cried.

I missed Dad more than words could say.
Dad gently wiped my tears away.

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Comments (11)

Deep passionate feelings elegantly brought forth from with conviction. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing.
Heartfelt poem about lossing a love one. It is indeed earth shattering most times. Ty
Very well done. I have fond memories of my dad also. I was expecting this poem to be humorous like most of your others that I have read, and was very surprised but not disappointed.
We lived and loved and laughed a lot. Dad praised my hopes and soothed my fears. Learn from feeling - was what Dad taught. kneeling at the grave, i cried and Dad wiped my tears........ poetic fantasy immersed in deep love and sense of loss, marvelous words my dear poetess. tony
Verily, a heart touching poem, After mother's love, the second greatest love is of a dad, Loved reading it..........10
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