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Daddy I Hate You

Daddy, I hate you
Daddy, I love you
Daddy, I really don't have a clue
But, that one time I flew
But, you didn't care
It isn't fair
You never share
What is with you? ?
Do I need to hit you with my shoe?
That is covered with dog doo
You never made me happy
You always said my hair was nappy
Don't you love me
I love you
Wait, no I don't!
I hate you
You made me feel blue
Please, go away
I'm not even gonna play
Or, i'll make you out of clay
Don't delay
Just go away

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Comments (5)

fantastic one.a mixture feeling between love and hatred.some times love changes to hatred.i have the same written(love = hatred) please read if you have time. best ~nb
this is the worst poem which I have heard yet. Nobody can have a such bad feeling to her family especially her father. You should check yourself then express your feeling idiot
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I understand your feelings, I myself share the same sort of mixed feeling regarding my father. your poem was fresh in topic, but I sensed that sometimes It proved comedy(hitting with the shoe!) and at other times was completely serious. maybe you shouldn't only focus on making words rhyme but try expressing what is in your heart. good luck!
Ferret Girl, this is one of the most saddest poems I have ever read. The mixed feelings and emotions used to write this about your father, come through very clear here. I don't know your exact circumstances but I'd say that maybe there is a way to make amends with your father, and that the two of you can come to an understanding. I do hope that you do try. Thanx for sharing. With love n hugs, Barbara 'If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be.'