Damn

Poem By Sue DeRochie

A big beaver built a large dam
In a pond where he ate and he swam
He got caught in a trap
With a big sounding snap
That's the end of that pond's logjam.

Comments about Damn

Beautiful piece of poetry elegantly embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing Sue.
Hilarious! Welcome to Poem Hunter, Sue. This is a terrific limerick.Sad to see such a fate befall a national symbol, though....really well done! A 10.
Nice limerick, Sue. You have a consistent syllable count of 8,8,6,6,8. Well done and welcome to Poem Hunter!


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