Dark Sands

Poem By Shelby Jasmin Estrada

Dark sand running through my fingers
Like water dripping from the leaves of a palm tree
Smooth and rushing
This dark sand
Like the stars in the sky
Shining with every movement
The dark sands of a beach far away
Rushing in the oceans waters

Comments about Dark Sands

The imagery portrayed is just splendid that depicts the melancholic and alarming feeling of frightfulness of losing something........a beautiful poem....10
Sandy beaches... plam trees... ocean waves... lovely imagery. In few words so much expressed!


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