Dawn Patrol (Haiku)

Poem By Scarborough Gypsy

Big waves ten foot plus,
Fear fills my heart - board too small
Maybe tomorrow

Comments about Dawn Patrol (Haiku)

Hahaaa lol, I like this
A great haiku! Wonderful waves!
I write haiku, too and I spent some time on the PH forum...that is where I discover new poets and their poems for me to read..wonderful haiku about uncertainty and fear...
Oh, the atmosphere and power of nature.You have done us proud with this one.Love Duncan
5-7-5... nice one.


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