To live again, I
will not come after dying for
by Satish Verma
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Comments about Deadbeat
07 Jun 11:52
Congratulations on your poem being chosen as the 'Member Poem Of The Day'! The last stanza of the poem is thought provoking.
07 Jun 07:04
The only thing immortal is dust, and the memory lost in the wind. Thoughtful and meditative work, it lingers in the mind. Well chosen for poem of the day.
07 Jun 03:23
A concise and insightful verse. A witty philosophical reflection.
07 Jun 08:49
An outstanding poem rightfully selected as poem of the day, congratulations
Dr Tony Brahmin
07 Jun 07:36
I ask the dust, when did you slip from the moon to kiss immortal? What a wonderful imagination my dear poet. tony
Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair
07 Jun 06:44
To live again, I will not come after dying for you. Resurrection? Congratulations
07 Jun 04:48
as usual, this poem takes us to greater height to Moon, as the dust slipped from it to kiss the immortal.. Thank you for sharing...Congratulations!
07 Jun 04:15
A philosophical introvert and intriguing poem with deep meaning. Congrats on selection as poem of the day second time.
07 Jun 04:11
Deadbeat epitaph slipping from the moon to arrange anniversary...............congrats..........
07 Jun 2019 11:56
A meaningful and thought provoking deadbeat. Congrats on poem of the Day.
07 Jun 2019 11:28
Don't leave a cut on the sandstone to mark the anniversary............What a profound message to the society! Great stuff. Congrats on your positioning X
Anil Kumar Panda
07 Jun 2019 09:20
Great poem indeed. Touching....Congrats.
Edward Kofi Louis
07 Jun 2019 08:20
To live again! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Dr Tony Brahmin
07 Jun 2019 08:18
Don't leave a cut on the sandstone to mark the anniversary. in a very gentle way and in simple style you wrote a fine poem full of imagination. tony
07 Jun 2019 03:53
Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulation for being chosen as the member poem of the poem of the day.
07 Jun 2019 02:15
Your last stanza is outstanding.
07 Jun 2019 01:04
death cannot touch the dust immortally!
Sylvia Frances Chan
07 Jun 2019 12:33
Congratulations for being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day. A thought provoking poem.
07 Jun 2019 12:15
A interesting read, congratulations on poem of the day
07 Jun 2019 12:11
Well done, impactful with lesser words but powerful profundity. Congrats on POD poem of the day....
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