' Death' (Loop Poem)

Poem By Marvin Brato Sr

Procreation is a gift
gift shared in marriage

Marriage is sacred
sacred defines life

Life is quite monumental
monumental as in special

Special thing being alive
alive to take adventure

Adventure is exploration
exploration for survival

Survival declares the fittest
fittest among others is finite

Finite is human life's span
span of living is unpredictable

Unpredictable is our existence
existence that soon shall vanish

Vanish shall become all of us
us as human succumbs to death

Comments about ' Death' (Loop Poem)

I agree with Valerie's comment. Good write!
I like the structure of this poem best. I like your imagery, although I prefer they would be more brightly colored. You are so somber for one so young. Why is it?
Loop poems are new to me - very good write.


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