Deception

We walked through the city side by side
With my secrets in you I do confide
Familiar faces all so strange
So many colours oh such a range

by Zoe SEM Click to read full poem

Comments about Deception

John Richter 10 May 2017 03:35
Love Sucks.... The J. Geils Band. It's like my theme song. Welcome to the broken hearts club Zoe!
Bichitra Anand 10 May 2017 01:30
Such painful lines come in every body's life.beautiful.
Unnikrishnan E S 10 May 2017 12:20
Hi Zoe, First, Congratulations on being selected poet of the day! This beautiful poem of yours deserved the recognition, for its poetic beauty, rhyme, rhythm and neat vocabulary.10++
Chayan Sarkar 10 May 2017 09:18
my secrets in you I do confide.....brilliant line...don't weep Zoe SEM haha
Jayatissa K. Liyanage 10 May 2017 09:06
Echoing of a sound in a wrecked heart, wonderfully knitted. Congrats for being the member's PoD. x
Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 10 May 2017 09:05
It is terrible to discover that one you loved and trusted has deceived and cheated. A sad poem of deception.
Anil Kumar Panda 10 May 2017 08:05
It is really sad losing one you loved so much. Sad poem and beautifully done. Congrats.
Pranab K Chakraborty 10 May 2017 07:37
Well exposed dreams and broken trust. Lucid and brilliant.
Tom Allport 10 May 2017 04:57
a poem of trust gone out the window quickly followed by shouts of thunder? ..........well penned.
Richard Wlodarski 10 May 2017 02:43
No where left in which to hide! Congratulations on Poem Of The Day!
Bernard F. Asuncion 10 May 2017 02:39
Hope and pray..... congrats on being chosen... a big 10++++
Kim Barney 10 May 2017 12:41
Congratulations on Member Poem of the Day! Nice poem about deception by a loved one.
Edward Kofi Louis 10 May 2017 12:17
Walking together! Side by side. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.