Deep Blue Seas

The watery blue seas are like my podles
of water of my deep blue tears that I cryed
over you.

Its like the podles that are continuing but
they are never stopping.
Just like the big deep blue sea.

The waves of the ocean are the waves in
my hair that you use too put your fingers through
all the time.

But, now my heart is like a deep blue sea
that is filled with emtpiness.

by Samantha Zimmerman

Comments (1)

It's a brilliant poem Samantha and I really like it. One thing though - when you write I've noticed that you make mistakes and sometimes write in text language if you wrote in full than it woul be a lot more powerful and easier to decipher. Well done though.