Deep Shadows! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Deep in the candor of a foolish heart
the flame of your soul does ignite
deep in the hollow of my essence
I have learned of your luminous light

Deep in a soul so shallow
you choose to enter upon
no worldly goods can compare
To the love of this one

Deep in the shadow of misconceived
is a spirit....the likes unknown
water the seed thou has planted
for thy love thou has shown

Deep in the heart of a soulful cry
from the depth of my very being
a spirit filled weep, incomplete
your enlightenment keeps teasing.

Deep in the very place of mine
a room of entangled delight
your spirit holds the only key
only you fill the room with light...........

by Geoff Warden

Comments (4)

Pristine thoughts... flood the mind, surging like a Water Fall from the first line! I truly enjoyed this poem.(A 10 for you!) Deanna xx .
Beautiful, a door and an opening, what a wonderful thought, light lies behind, Love duncan x
SIR G....GOOD NEWS IZ THAT I LIKE THIS PIECE FROM IT'S METERIND & TIGHT CONSTRUCTION DOWN TO IT'S STELLAR IMAGHERY.............. THE BAD NEWS IS THAT IN SUBMITTING THIS POEM, YOU MUST HAVE CLOSED OFF YOUR USER RATING METER...GO BACK TO ''EDIT YOUR POEMS'' & YOUWILL SEE WHAT I MEAN AT THE BOTTOM OF SCREEN...TELL TRACEY SHE HAS THE SAME SITUATION ON 1 OF HER POEMS (I THINK THE 1 ON YOU OR HERSELF) SHE'LL FIND IT...LET ME KNOW WHEN ALL IS DONE & I'LL JOURNEY BACK OVER TO BOTH SITES & GIV YA YIR JUS' REWARDZZZ! '''''''''''''''''''FRANK
Deep love and thinking in this one Geoff. WELL DONE! Patricia