Deep Sorrows And

Deep sorrows

Friday, January 5,2018
6: 01 AM

Deep sorrows
Friday, January 5,2018
6: 01 AM
Eyes are deep and lovely
If you examine throroughly
You will find deep ocean
And waves never seen

It flows love
And you got to believe it
It has up and down too
Everything comes out of it with truth

Cultivate habit
And greet
With honesty and faithfulness
You shall be shown life's success

Particularly in ladies
They have beautiful eyes
But baneth it, you find deep sorrows
You find nothing if you fail or slow down

She has something to reveall
And you shall certainly feel
The tremendous focus for future
Her eyes shall definitely assure the solution

by Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Comments (9)

Hasmukh Bhai, if you are talking about women of Hindiu mythology you are correct. In case of women of Greek mythology I dispute what you say. KH Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka - 581343, Jan 06,2018
I so agree with you on this, Sir. We all are hiding deep sorrows behind the forced smiles :) Chirasree Bose, Hyderabad, Jan 06,2018 A good read. Yes I agree with the thought. Supratik Sen, Kolkata, Jan 06,2018I so agree with you on this, Sir. We all are hiding deep sorrows behind the forced smiles :) Chirasree Bose, Hyderabad, Jan 06,2018
A good read. Yes I agree with the thought. Supratik Sen, Kolkata, Jan 06,2018 Supratik Sen, Kolkata, Jan 06,2018 Supratik Sen, Kolkata, Jan 06,2018
This poem has mixed thoughts and not one dominates; that is the problem at this try at poetry as i see it. The lines are poetic, though. Thanks! Luis A. Estable
welcome henry farrell Like Like Love
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