Deep Within You Dream

Deep within you dream;
and how you spent your days-
kept gone and others none to have.
With night you come and ride away.
Thus am common be and labors man,
and dreary all my hope is washed away.
Why is how you keep me deep inside,
that place that is no more-
and you within this dream I found.

by James McLain

Comments (5)

that place that is no more- and you within this dream I found...very dreamy indeed like eyes in a picture you cannot stop looking at, well done thinking poem ++++=10 regards
Really like this poem; seems like pure iip all condensed; many poems into a single one..(smile)
that poem really stuck to me. i dont noe why but it did. its very...sweet and its too incredible for words =)
sweet, lovely and captivating.. romantic title... I love this... 10+++ lovelots, Maia
hmn...dream within her dream, your dream is awakened from within...short verses, meaningfully weaven...Good morning! (here)