Depression Isn'T Obvious Suicide Is

Depression isn't obvious but suicide is.
My pain nobody sees.
My my mangled body they shall see.
My head was all but a mess.

by Amy Louise Kerswell Click to read full poem

Comments (16)

This poem made me feel depressed
It's never too late. Help is there and the right help, helps.
Very powerful, Hope you're okay. Take care.10/10/
Really powerful Stay strong We care
I can really relate to it.... I would like you read my poem In the mid of the night, depression you are killing me too.... Keep courage.... Well expressed... Naila
I can relate to this poem If you are not going through it you would never understand
That's so sad.I feel for her.
Why the would u write a poem bout suicide....? ; -;
Excellent, heart felt writing. The pain, hurt, hopelessness jumps off the page along with the Insight, Intelligence, Compassion and Caring. Keep writing.
Amy, you've had the courage to so honestly open up. And look at the people that you're helping. I commend you on the great job that you've done with this poem. And please, never give up!
This is lovely and so true. I am very happy I found a poem that is everything I'm feeling right now. You might be a life saver. Thank you so much. You have skill and I really hope you share some more. Please do whatever it takes to feel better.
I hear you and wish to hear more from you, climb up from the well, you've fallen into. Find your voice and scream out, rage if you can than stand and speak out again and again. be well
Ive got to read a poem that reflects my own feelings in front of my class, so im choosing this one. I hope you dont mind ~A.B
this poem reflects how I feel I've been diagnoised as depressed by17 doctors and my parents still don't believe them
amazing poem. it's one of my favorites
this poem is so true i love this poem and i am going to tell everyone about it