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Designer Love

Very well I contradict myself
knock myself out
looking for a knockout
won't settle for a knockoff
a friendship bracelet
is never enough
in a department store
busy shopping for
I need your
designer love.
immortal while we're shopping

User Rating: 3,5 / 5 ( 11 votes ) 6

Comments (6)

powerful.I hope it works......
This was playful! Imaginative way to get your point across. Very well written
Very well said. We agree with the poet's contention that what is needed is unadulterated love in a relationship. All else is secondary. Following expression is quite eloquent: a friendship bracelet is never enough
Wonderful as well as meaningful and demanding muse. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
Cute drop! ! .Nice reading! !
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