RRR (03-09-1982 / Timisoara, Romania)

Dialogue

I'll make you a carpet of kisses,
To walk on my love and my lips,
To feel what every woman misses,
To give to your life all the bliss.

But kisses can vanish away,
Why giving your love just in part,
It would be like saying a pray,
Without knowing with which words to start!

Who are you to judge all my actions,
And why do you critic my trust?
Don't divide my love into sections
And don't judge my life from the past.

I'm not judging your actions or life,
And I don't want to change you at all,
Opinions sometimes can be a knife
And can hurt your feelings... or more! ?

13-01-08

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Nice poem....i like the tone and choice of words...well done!