Did I Die?

When Is Time?
Is It Time?
Did I Die?
Yet My time is not up
Blacked out
Dead?
Yet found my way

Awoken

Crawled back
Alive
Questions
Answers
Not Quite right



Warm
So many to thank
Young Doctors
Who cared
Nurses too

Giving
A drive to survive
Knowing
So much more in life to do

Holding on
Each moment
Great to be alive
Life is too short
A will to survive

Thank You




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October 25th Lyn Paul

by Lyn Paul

Comments (9)

Sometimes, the will to live makes all the difference. Outstanding piece of work, Lyn!
i find your spirit behind this poem
Whenever I do something enjoyable, I think of my brother-in-law who died too young and it makes me grateful for the day. Your fine poem also reminds us to appreciate these times. I'm sorry for your loss Lyn.
Here is me worrying about me dying and my Mum has died today. But I know that she has lived and now sleeps peacefully. x
Beautiful poem Lyn. A beautiful comeback to life after a black out. When a person survives, after a struggle, he feels thankful to life. As many more beautiful things yet to be done in life. Fantastic lines add beauty to the poem... Holding on Each moment Great to be alive Life is too short A will to survive Very true said, life is short and its really a great to be alive. Loved the positive message it conveys. Beautiful presentation. Loved reading it. Thank you Lyn for the lovely and Inspiring comments for my poem.
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