A Spare Of Thought

He sees a greener world...
He hears the fluttering woods..,
He breathes the untainted air..,
He lives his life in a peaceful world

He sees a sweltering sun..
He hears the crying swish...
He breathes the left over air...
He lives his life in a crammed world...

He sees a bloodbath..
He hears the rifle trigger...
He breathes the dreaded air...
He lives his lives in a warfare world...

Different He's...
Different Live's...
Different World's...
But one thing all have in common...
Every one strives to Live...

by Anand Kumar

Comments (7)

Great imagery, good sentiment, and healthily defiant. Like it.
hey come to think of it I think you have a very good talent, I really like it much.keep your rhymes to pen always they are so heavenly and blessed.maxim muyu
When you send out your words, they land on good ground, Just look, Below Love Duncan X
SUS, , YOU'VE TICKLED ME VERSICAL FANCY W/ THESE LINES THAT CONFIDENTLY DELIVER WITH A SMACK OF POESQUE FLAVOUR, AND A FLAVOUR SUPERIOR TO ALL LITERARY ICONS TO DATE(My Opinion) Fine write, Sus..keep rockin! '''''''''''''FRANK
There is much substance and depth in this. Great stuff.
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