Divided We Fall

I don’t want to be one of those—bewailing in the wanton azure—
“I could have been so much more than this! ”

With my heart all curdled
And my brain echoing—

This madness is my revenge:
“You could have done so much more with me.”

by s./j. goldner

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Great imagery, good sentiment, and healthily defiant. Like it.
hey come to think of it I think you have a very good talent, I really like it much.keep your rhymes to pen always they are so heavenly and blessed.maxim muyu
When you send out your words, they land on good ground, Just look, Below Love Duncan X
SUS, , YOU'VE TICKLED ME VERSICAL FANCY W/ THESE LINES THAT CONFIDENTLY DELIVER WITH A SMACK OF POESQUE FLAVOUR, AND A FLAVOUR SUPERIOR TO ALL LITERARY ICONS TO DATE(My Opinion) Fine write, Sus..keep rockin! '''''''''''''FRANK
There is much substance and depth in this. Great stuff.
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