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Dodging Bullets
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Dodging Bullets

Poem By Carsten Thomsen

Dodging bullets
gathering speed
get over or rid of
the things that I need

Sliding down the
pavement of
one-way streets

From the ashes
From the cross
Against traffic
Against all odds

It feeds
It breathes
No longer needs


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Comments (2)

nice flow..keep writing!
nice build up to the final stanza. liz