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Don'T Count Me Out Of Life Yet!
MN (11-08-1970 / )

Don'T Count Me Out Of Life Yet!

Don't count me out of life yet.
There's so much I must do.
I have to tell our babies how
I fell in love with you!

I have to let them know just how
you turned my world around.
They need to know the Heaven
you made sure that we had found.

Don't count me out of life yet.
There's so much I must see.
I want to visit the ocean floor
and I want you there with me!

So many lovely places
that we have never been.
One day we have to travel...
to gaze in wonder at Big Ben.

Don't count me out of life yet.
There's so much I must feel.
Our grandchilds tiny fingertips
as they grasp for what is real.

I'll be that sweet ol' Gramma
that I dreampt of all my life.
I'll feel sweet separation
as our youngest takes a wife.

Don't count me out of life yet.
There's so much I must say.
I love you just is not enough
to express my thoughts today.

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Comments (7)

Mary: It sounds like you've been blessed with the perfect man. I wish you and your family, many! many! many! blessed years ahead..............Dave
I was also very touched by this one and always hope the best for you! !
Having read about 8 of your latest, Mary I must say that you are writing seriously good stuff. And your versatility is growing in leaps and bounds. Best H
Just superb Mary! A lovely, lovely write, I had tears in my eyes reading this one. Another word for it is beautiful. The flow of it was superb too. My congratulations. I'm giving you a 10. Love Ernestine XXX
Beautifully expressed sentiment....... as always avr
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