WAD (April 2,1982 / Riyadh K.S.A)

Set Free

dont you see
we're not ment to be.
yes! im a prisoner set free.
you say i have to pay,
a very small fee.
but i've done my time
so im free to rome.
you want me to pay
or even get out a different day.
'Just wait till may' you say.
but im like hell no!
this is my time
to do what i please.
its going to be all about me.
i may call just to please
but you see im please'n me
by be'n free.
i have no commitment with thee!

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Comments (1)

This looses the rhythm even more. Try counting the sylables in your lines, or try writing a 'prose' poem. Bob Dylan used to just throw words together without reason to get the flow of a rhythm. Try re-working this, keep writing.