JR (June 06,1981 / Ontario, Canada)

Doubts

So many questions
Yet the answers so few
Have so many doubts
Should I tell you I love you?
Or should I hold back?
What if you find it funny
For you to be fantasized
By someone like me?
What if you tell me
To get lost and get real
And laugh at my face
If I told you how I feel?
But what if you confessed
That you’ve loved me for the longest time
And just couldn’t bring yourself
To ask for this heart of mine?
So many doubts
Rush through my head
How easy things would be
If thoughts were only said!

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Comments (3)

you know how to say I love you indirectly. sweet of you
Another beautiful write.. Such great flow, and a creative way to express an unspoken love... you're a true romantic.
JEUNESE>ONCE AGAIN, AS WAS EXHIBITED IN YOUR POEM''LOST''YOU DEMONSTRATE A METICULI FOR STRUCTURE...TIGHT, CRISP.; YET SMOOTH FLOWING LINEAGE...SPECIAL ATTENTION ALSO APPLIED IN IMAGING YOUR STAGE....WELL CRAFTED PIECE, ALL-AROUND ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''~F. J. R.~''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''