Early Morning Treats

Sunrays disquiet your sweet slumber,
As you twist in bed, coiled in bedspread.
Your arms settle on my body
Perhaps, they were searching for me.

by .Pd. is here Click to read full poem

Comments (9)

P.D., I've been waitin for someone like yourself to write out a fantasy I wish would come true. Thanx for sharing!
I really enjoyed this poem. ''Touching'', it brought a smile to my face! ! Thank You!
what a beautiful picture it brings to mind! keep it up!
gr8 poem...buddy! ! ! nice flow n yeah very romantic....luv ur style of writing....keep it up! ! ! !
whoa...amazing fantastic poem preets....really enjoyed the treats... keep it up! ! ! .....
Preets..... This is so very romantic.... your words are so full of power that they build the scene right in front.... This is a different you! Loved the smooth flow of words... absolutely romantic reflections!
Aww this is so sweet... I love waking up to moments in love :)
hey preets, this is quite different from what u usually write...i mean in terms of diction n style... i liked it though... love, Asma...
Such a loving piece.....