Poem By Hollie McDaniel

at first i thought
i should be mad
but i wasn't
then i thought
i should be sad
wasn't that either
what was my emotion
what was i feeling
not a tear
not a scream
nothing in between
i wasn't happy
not excited
don't want to cry
don't won't to fight
wont laugh
wont smile
where's my emotions
they seem to be away
and can't even be confused
but hey its all good
i HATE emotions anyway

written on 2/21/07

Comments about Emotions

beautiful hun, very good =)
Great way to describe the emotion of nothing. This is something I can relate to. Keep up the good work.

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