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LO Linda Ori (08/13/1945 / UTAH)

Endings

I remember long ago
When I thought you loved me so,
But today I just don't know
What your feelings are;
Time has passed and so have we -
You and I no longer see
Much upon which we agree -
We've gone our separate ways;
You don't look into my eyes,
I don't care to sympathize,
All we do is criticize -
What have we become?
Two shells cracking under stress,
Neither wanting to confess
The depth of our unhappiness -
Indifference settles in
When we fail to love or hate,
Or take time to appreciate,
Then I guess it's just too late -
We go our separate ways.

User Rating: 4,5 / 5 ( 6 votes ) 6

Comments (6)

What love can become is often a truly sad story. It's a potent brew when the mix is right, but you never know till you shake the glass and knock it back. And there's no easy way out. Good or bad, lives become entangled. A hard hitting, realistic and sorrowful piece of poetry Linda. Very well written as ever! ! jim xx
I can only hope that this heartfelt, sad, poem was written by your muse! Otherwise, too real, too sad to contemplate after your last happy offering: ( Jack
LINDA...THANK YOU FOR ALL YOUR READS TONIGHT.LINDA, THE ABOVE WORK IS BEAUTIFULLY HEARTPULSING...SMOOTH, TIGHT FLUX &W/ THE ALWAYS ABSOLUTE DISPLAY OF(what I hereforth will refer to & urge all members to follow suit with) , THE ORI-ESQUE '' MOTION OF PASSION ''. WHICH DEFINES THE COMMITTED & CONSIDERATE PERSON YOU ARE! A PERFECT (10 RATING) FOR '' ENDINGS ''CATCH YOU SOON...FRANK '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''~F. J. R.~''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''
Captured perfectly, privilage to read.
A very heartfelt poem expressing how to often we take each for granted, hope in your case it was'nt true, but the lines flowed so well an enjoyable read: -))
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