Enlightened One

Sin dangles inaccessibly two feet away from oppression
Betwixt the two is a serpentine stream
Which carries the Constitution

By excluding sin there can be no pleasure
Without pleasure there can not be attributes of God

Oh God, speed up oppressions
Give it the magnet-zeal, enlightenment

Sin dangles inaccessibl two feet from oppression
Nothing exists in between
Any shame, any repentance

by CHOUDHURI SUKUMAR

Comments (1)

Excellent foundation. Some grammatical/spelling issues, but overall good.