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A Beautiful Soul

A person i miss so much,
a person who was my enemy
now a dear friend...

A friend he was, a beautiful soul
the most sweetest person inside and out,
can't stay a day without his sweet talks
A friend he is, lovely and dear...

I was scared-i could say
scared by his sweetness and frankness
I can't describe what i want to say,
the person who i treated with such hostility
Is now a person, who i most dearly care about

Learnt a lot from him,
a lesson to my life, gave a new meaning to me
a friend he is,
beautiful inside and out....

I wait and i wait,
frustration brews inside me-
when he is not around....

A friend he is..
naughty and stupid

But a friend he'll remain-
who i shall forget not
beautiful and irritating inside and out! ! !

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Comments (4)

This is quite astonishing Charles. It has a much different feel to it than your previous Berstein works. here you are not relying on the narration of the characters as the theme. Here the narration of the characters is kept to a minimum as Berstein ponders creation through nature. But, also through the tale he has been told by Billy. Neither are more impactual than the other. This is fantastic. The change from your previous work in this 'series' is so subtle.
Charles, Another story well told, another perspective on solitude and connection held together with the warm cement of compassion. Thank you for a fine story and poem. Hugh
Excellent read, and particularly enjoyed the guidance offered, the redirecting of thought to a new perspective, that offered perhaps a little closure.
This was a very enjoyable read Charles.