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Eternity
DP (June12,1966 / Kapadwanj, Gujarat (India))

Eternity

This is
Not only a
'TIME'
We've spent together...
But,
1,065,096,000
Times
My Heart
Echoed your name
'My Dear'
During this..
27 years...
324 months...
1408 weeks...
9862 days....
236,688 hours...
14,201,280 minutes....
852,076,800 seconds....
It Sounded like
Love...Love...Love...
The Eternal emotion
The Eternal Language
The Eternal source of Life
The only cause of human existence,
The finest of all feelings,
Apart from lust.
I really owe you all this time
For being with me
As my
S.o.u.l.m.a.t.e.

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Ah what a poem coming straight from the heart and ordering the head to do all the maths and the details, lovely, I loved it.
I liked how this poem has been crafted. So honest and so passionate. Words with the count of times on how you show your love to your wife is a very unique way of expressing one's love. A beautiful poem so heartwarming and full of tenderness.
Revisiting this poem for the 3rd time....still amazing!
Revisiting this poem amazed me time and again...So romantic...to my poem list.
A quintessential quantifying of the most qualitative emotion-love! I really owe you all this time For being with me As my S.o.u.l.m.a.t.e. Lovely lines loaded with love. Well done my friend!
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