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Falling Asleep At 5: 30
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Falling Asleep At 5: 30

Poem By Charles Chaim Wax

in the afternoon
the sweetest part of my life
no solutions
life stained
an adamantine wrinkle
in my heart
wanting oblivion

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Comments (3)

I think I like being asleep better than being awake, I really do.
interesting poem...one i really enjoyed reading...where would we be without those renewing naps? best regards-faith
On which side of 5: 30 was this poem written, Charles. It 'feels' like one of those nap inspired 'things'. Nice.