Farewell To Love

I gave up all i had
just for me to be heard
but lacked the boldness
to fix the bait to the hook

I tried to open up
but all i could like a broken cup
was to see myself shattered in shamble
as though defeated in a rumbe

She loves some one else
for so i was told or else
i would have been gone
but my love sticks like gum

Fare well to love
good bye my love
as i leave you like a friend
to meet at last like strangers

Why is love so cruel
to have tortured the heart once loved
she may not have noticed
but a murderer having mudered

by micheal udenyi

Comments (2)

a beautiful write that tells the tale of vagaries young hearts have to face in love life...frank and expressive lines well meant nicely framed...10
wow the last stanza really struck me this poem definitely deserves a 10 and don't give up on love! there is someone out there for you