Fashion Focus Artist (With A Sense Of Humor)
I was photographed once
at a coffee shop—
by s./j. goldner
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21 Feb 2008 08:09
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16 Sep 2007 03:15
Reminds me of my photo taken at age 8 as I was looking out of the corner of my eyes to my friend in order to escape the painful flash - and how BAD I felt about that awful photo - NOBODY was ever captured like that - and my husband wants to know why I'm not interested in photography - there is something evil in it! Kind regards, Margaret.
28 Oct 2006 01:52
Quite a stirring picture of one moment in time... both the photo and the descrption of its capture. Well done.
09 Sep 2006 04:44
yawned and he flashed, the line fits, still not your best.........................
09 Sep 2006 01:24
An excellent write Sus, I would agree with Anna's comment... you captured the beauty of being captured.......and Im sure the photo was perfect as well.......
09 Sep 2006 12:49
Sus, I like the banality of the yawn... it was picture perfect! ! Great write! ! Brian
09 Sep 2006 12:46
You have captured the beauty of that moment in the same way the photographer captured the beauty of you - very well done Sus. Hugs Anna xxx
A. Michael Sears
09 Sep 2006 12:36
Sus, I love this poem. It certainly captures a moment. I can see the whole scene. It makes me smile...and want a cup of coffee. So, I'm off to the MT Mug. Be good to you... a.m.
john tiong chunghoo
09 Sep 2006 12:07
poetic talent shining through. catching me like a yawn.
Marie Joyce Negapatan
09 Sep 2006 12:07
Simple yet it can effectively trigger an image of what you're trying to portray in your words. Good job! :)