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Father's Fun
SM (21-01-2003 / Odisha, India)

Father's Fun

When the darkness encaged the glittering sun,
Words uttered from someone unknown.
I was frightened, my toes too started trembling
And when I woke up to find out the truth,
I found my father happily snoring.

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Comments (3)

Wow. Quite humorous write...loved reading it.
This is simply beautiful and phenomenal write and short and funny as well....Saheb......but you have made it a sweet poem instead of limerick.....while composing limerick you should keep in mind its rules like lines 1,2 and 5 should rhyme and lines 3 and 4 should rhyme also, lines 1,2 and 5 should have 7 – 10 syllables and lines 3 and 4 should have 5 – 7 syllables. Any way a tenner from me for good composition
So beautiful is your presentation of night- When the darkness caged the glittering sun, ...lovely that's the charm of poetry in the game of words- rhetoric..thank you very much