(11th july / )

Favour Of God

Their path so smooth.
Their destination so near;
But I tread path much crude.
My destination so unclear.

'Why God is so cruel';
They pity looking at me.
But poor they, I pity them.
Wish to lend my eyes to see.

O God! I am so grateful to you;
For your favour on me.
Sweetness of water is known;
But to only a man thirsty.

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Comments (4)

God's love is discerned only by a devotee, as water is relished only by those who are thirsty! What seems bitter to others may be sweet to a seeker of God as his eyes are glued to the final destination...! A poem of profound thoughts!
well effort like petition or supplication O God! I am so grateful to you; For your favour on me. Sweetness of water is known; But to only a man thirsty. thank you :)
well effort like petition or supplication O God! I am so grateful to you; For your favour on me. Sweetness of water is known; But to only a man thirsty. thank you :)
Nice work. Loved the last lines.