The Chinese Peasant Man's Threesome
catch you later
after a while
by doug bentley
Other poems of BENTLEY (184)
A Canadian's Poem (1)
30 Aug 2018 10:07
Please respect your own poetry enough to spell correctly...the spelling errors in this poem reduces it to far less than the heart you put into it. A bad writer always is a writer who does not edit his work.
19 Feb 2010 10:57
Man's love for man will never be perfect though we should strive for such. Your right on the mark. The fear is in the unknowns. I should know. I'd swear you had been reading the messages between me and my ex reunited after 2 years. Wonderful insight.
19 Dec 2005 03:19
Great poetry, yet so true! Keep up the excellent work. I really enjoyed it.
Christian Eliab Ratnam
15 Oct 2005 11:38
1John 4: 18 There is no fear in love; but perfect love casteth out fear: because fear hath torment. He that feareth is not made perfect in love. This is what the Bible says about love! I think you should ponder a little more on the content! Anyway good poetic essence.
01 Feb 2005 03:30
Welcome. Thanks for truth in poetry.