The Chinese Peasant Man's Threesome

catch you later

after a while

by doug bentley

Comments (6)

Please respect your own poetry enough to spell correctly...the spelling errors in this poem reduces it to far less than the heart you put into it. A bad writer always is a writer who does not edit his work.
Man's love for man will never be perfect though we should strive for such. Your right on the mark. The fear is in the unknowns. I should know. I'd swear you had been reading the messages between me and my ex reunited after 2 years. Wonderful insight.
Great poetry, yet so true! Keep up the excellent work. I really enjoyed it.
1John 4: 18 There is no fear in love; but perfect love casteth out fear: because fear hath torment. He that feareth is not made perfect in love. This is what the Bible says about love! I think you should ponder a little more on the content! Anyway good poetic essence.
Welcome. Thanks for truth in poetry.
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