Feel The Beats

I have got a heart that beats like yours
And It gets hurt same as yours
Why do you hurt my feelings...
Can't you see, It aches for you
When you walk away, it searches for you
And It looks for the traces of footstep
Why do you hurt my feelings..
Can't you hear the call, it's weeping
The tears are flowing, can you wipe them
Come back to me, I am waiting for you
Here I am for you, just for you
Don't break this heart, it's all yours
Don't hurt my feelings..

by Rini Shibu

Comments (7)

Great write. Enjoyed.++10- - - - -
A poignant but hopeful write.+++10
Why do you hurt my feelings.. Can't you hear the call, it's weeping The tears are flowing, can you wipe them Come back to me, I am waiting for you.....Brilliantly penned! Thanks for sharing Rini
(part 2) But, as Robert has said, we should have repetitive stanzas to augment the mood. Like the pallavi in film songs repeated again and again... -unnikrishnan
Hi Rini, Lovely write on love and hurt and of course, a painful heart.. Your words bring out the feelings in their entirety. Good! Congrats for the wonderful poem..
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