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Feminine Mystery Of The Eternal Goddess

I’m writing the poetry of fragile souls
Sitting quietly in the broken sunlight
Of hopeful but fleeting romance.

I’m gazing into the nearly tearful eyes
Of beautiful women paralyzed
By lost love or unhappy lives,
Waiting for kisses
That somehow missed their lips.

And I want to breathe in their rooms,
Be by their side through turbulent moods,
Find the key to unlock their dreams
Currently hidden in emotional vaults
Or shelved somewhere by men who don’t care.

And the feminine mystery of the eternal Goddess
Continues to relentlessly and mystically possess me,
Aphrodite guides me into pleasant meditation.

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Major Congrats & Mega Kudo's on The PH Poem of The Day, my ole' friend in time & verse...~FjR~
Wonderful composition. The poem portrays the pain and sadness of those hapless women who have been left alone by their stone-heated lovers. It tries to (I quote) : Find the key to unlock their dreams Currently hidden in emotional vaults
Such an encapsulating piece Marvelous
I can dig it but I would use 'hidden' instead of 'hid'. Just me.
i thought the last stanza was a little underdeveloped but that could just be me. otherwise, i thought it was beautiful.
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