Fervent Whispers!

Fervent Whispers,
like a breeze unknown,
finds its way across these plains.

On wings of imagery,
she invades my entity,
invoking emotional contradiction.

Abandonment of fear,
loosening of chains,
as she shares the dance manipulation.

Promise Land nears,
fervent whisper in ear,
as she leads this erotic dance.

Verbal exchange,
across the mile
engaged this exotic romance.

Fervent Whispers,
take total control,
as my passion runs out of my soul.

This wanting need
a part of me now,
an enlightenment of volcanic stroll.......

by Geoff Warden

Comments (3)

Yes, an energetic yet relaxed piece. I find it well penned; and engaging; nonetheless I can see the distinct improvement (to my eyes) between this, an early work, and your later more mature pieces. That is, by the way, a sincere compliment! t x
A rush of energy in this one, your poems seem very natural and have an individual style Great job Love Duncan X
GEOFF...YIR KICKIN' HIGH 'N WIDE...AN' LOOKIN' LIKE O' SHINY NU COIN OF WORTH...A 10 FOR YIR, SIR G....FRANK