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First Kiss
NLL (17.05.1981 / The Molten Core)

First Kiss

Poem By Not Long Left

Always dissapoinment.
nervously smiling, sweating uncomfortably.
bad breath fearing.
together lips entwining.
is that it?
-first kiss-
that it is:
entwining lips together
fearing bad breath
uncomfortably sweating, smiling nervously.
dissapointment always.

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Comments (2)

first kiss her dreamy eyes the whole week
Each and every one of us has been here at some time. good use of slow and fast pace to bring out the youthful hesitancy. Very poignant.