TTT (1979-present / San Leandro)

First Stone

The first time I saw you
was the first time I felt alive in a long time
I felt like I was Romeo reincarnated
I didn't have a stone to throw at your window
because I was afraid that it would ricochet
and come back to hit me on the head
You threw the first stone
and no female has ever done that
for me before
Thank you

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Comments (5)

Aww, this is so sweet! My husband actually use to throw pennies at my window to wake me up (we were next door neighbors) and then I'd sneak out to meet him (or sneak him in) We were bad kids! :) But, it all worked out. Good luck with your Juliet, Romeo! Sincerely, Mary
A lovely write, Cokbod. It is always flattering to be pursued by the other. Great images. May this feeling stay with you. Choose it. Hugh
Very clever one this Cokbod, a bit of humour thrown in for good measure - excellent. Loved it. Love Ernestine XXX
This is brilliant, yes in my opinion but brilliant none the less Thankyou
I deeply envy the woman, this poem is adressed to!