Five Fingers

Perfectly fitted as if by design
Your five fingers woven in mine
Coupled palms sublimely connecting
Severed love lines now intersecting
Sharing laughs and spending time
Captive souls forever entwined

by Brian Dorn

Comments (36)

It is by the hands that love lit its spark to connect the hearts of lovers. Romantic poetry Brian, worth a 10.
Wonderful poem Brian! One of the best love poems I've ever read! Way to capture the moment. I felt it! Top marks! -Michael
Oh Brian, this is a most beautiful love poem, What a lovely change to read something about love, I lilke that---Melvina---
so romantic..wish someone would write a poem like that about my fingers..its so refreshing to read poems of love written from the masculine perspective.. so passionate, astute and sensual.
Beautifully crafted poem. Fits me like a warm glove. All plaudits are well deserved! Best wishes. jack
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