Flashlight's Flame

The fine flashlight's flame fills
The cold dark room of lies;
Replacing them with truth,
As found by seeking eyes.

by Bernard F. Asuncion Click to read full poem

Comments (34)

Receive God's loving care........significant piece.anjandev roy.
Allow the heart to feel/The warmth of Father's flare/Trust in the clear message/Receive God's loving care...lofty expression! A great poem my friend, I find a lot of pleasure reading this wonderful work again and again!
I like the metaphors used in your poem.
Fun and imaginative poem about a flashlight.Really captures that sense of 'power' one might feel when using a flashlight just for fun and not for emergency measures which they are so often for. Nice poem about a basic daily activity and an action. Explaining the enigmatic power of daily acts! Great!
In the flashlights flame we see the enemy.
Only light can defeat darkness! God's light can not only neutralize the darkness of Satan, but also illumine the surroundings! Let light have the final victory! A beautiful poem coming from an enlightened heart! A sure 10
A wonderful poem! Brilliantly penned! My pleasure revisiting it!
Sometimes we need a little more light to guide us along the right path. Another brilliant poem Bernard.
The bright flashlight's flame fights The deceit of devil; Amazing poetic lines, dear Ber...................
The fine flashlight's flame fills The cold dark room of lies; Replacing them with truth, As found by seeking eyes. A fantastic first stanza of the whole poem, dear Bernie....................
Allow the heart to feel The warmth of Father's flare; Trust in the clear message, Receive God's loving care. This is powerful and inspiring, dear Bernard.......................
Another remarkable quatrain poem, Bernard. I love it❤️❤️❤️
Bernard, a well crafted brilliant poem.......... job well done.............
Beautiful poem Bernard. Let light of love and faith shine upon us all.
Night is about to fall, The shadows do the same; Make the perfect faith glow, Turn on the flashlight's flame. A beautiful poem on spirituality. When you happen to read a great poem from among many, the feeling is akin to getting a jewel from a mine. A great read that deserves more than 10. Thank you Bernard
Beauty in simplicity! 10+++
An imaginative write with great imagery. Well penned Bernard.++10
Nice treatment of the subject. Cheers, Patti
The flashlight's flame fights The deceit of the devil; Defeating the enemy's guile, By using the Almighty's will. -Wonderful expression! An excellent piece of poetry my friend! I vote it with a 10
The night is about to fall, The shadows do the same; Make your true faith glow, Turn on the flashlight's flame. Beautiful lines,